Tuesday, May 6, 2008

For a darling.....

Ah! I know where your fear is...
but you see, I write on my blog often....
in drunken states and over boiled emotions
in feverish states and a weak heart...
in crazy times and in happy moments
I write here all the time...
to relieve these feelings from tired shoulders....
I have never been good at poetry...
Hope you understand.

11 comments:

Doja said...

Okay is this like a hang over kind of thing? Yes I understand.

Uzezi said...

me understand too. how u dey?

Ms. Catwalq said...

my baby....
wait till you get on Fourth & Serenity and you can do all that more...

Kiibaati said...

Funny anytime you write
I find myself fighting hard
To read in between lines
And find deeper meanings still
Its the way the words ring right
And emotions, glad or sad
Point to deep truths,matured like wines
And I believe, "This must be real"!

You can not shake my conviction
Your poems and prose are not fiction

Afrobabe said...

ohhhh thank you thank you thank...

I understand much better now....

wole said...

The poetry bug has landed on your blog as well,beautiful poem.

wole said...

thought i left a comment here before, beautiful try, by the way u just got tagged, and if u had been tagged before, u just got tagged again

(¯`·._.·[***Fresh&Fab***]·._.·´¯) said...

it was quite good accually

ababoypart2 said...

"I have never been good at poetry..." - nahhh, I think you are

SOLOMONSYDELLE said...

If you were hung over when you wrote this, then you must do more drunken writing. lol!

How are you, my sista?

Uzezi said...

where r u now?